My research blog, dedicated to researching two subjects for the games design futures module! In my case, the two subjects I have chosen are food and surgery, let's see what can be made of them!
feedback continued.... You need to make sure your blog is formatted and presented well - At the moment it is a mess. You have copied adds in from Neilstoolbox with your Harvard references which should be in your bibliography and not in your main body of research; You have different sized fonts and as mentioned before, red and white fonts on a black background can be hard on the eyes. Make sure quotes are in italics to make them identifiable from the rest of your blog and again reference correctly.
Ideally at the end of each post draw some conclusions about what you have found: Does the diversity of research material show popularity for your topic, in not only name, but in the various definitions you have looked at? What other conclusions can you draw from your research? Lead us into your next section- E.g. from present into your past topic.
So to sum up: You still need to complete your research and reference correctly. You have no Forecast, Bibliography, IP opportunity statement or IP Justification for me to feedback on. Given there is only one week left, it is imperative that you get these points finished before addressing any corrections to your existing research. I hope you have actually done the work and that you just need to upload it - If not you have a long week ahead of you!
YOU HAVE A LOT OF WORK TO DO IF YOU WISH TO PASS THIS MODULE!
feedback continued....
ReplyDeleteYou need to make sure your blog is formatted and presented well - At the moment it is a mess. You have copied adds in from Neilstoolbox with your Harvard references which should be in your bibliography and not in your main body of research; You have different sized fonts and as mentioned before, red and white fonts on a black background can be hard on the eyes.
Make sure quotes are in italics to make them identifiable from the rest of your blog and again reference correctly.
Ideally at the end of each post draw some conclusions about what you have found: Does the diversity of research material show popularity for your topic, in not only name, but in the various definitions you have looked at? What other conclusions can you draw from your research? Lead us into your next section- E.g. from present into your past topic.
So to sum up: You still need to complete your research and reference correctly. You have no Forecast, Bibliography, IP opportunity statement or IP Justification for me to feedback on.
Given there is only one week left, it is imperative that you get these points finished before addressing any corrections to your existing research. I hope you have actually done the work and that you just need to upload it - If not you have a long week ahead of you!
YOU HAVE A LOT OF WORK TO DO IF YOU WISH TO PASS THIS MODULE!